Style 1:
Traditional Linear Outline
Summarized
Article’s Main Idea + Thesis Statement (Level I Controlling Idea):
“Nature Group Seeks
More Information on Impact of Cross Island Site Investigations" from Today
Online, nature enthusiasts groups are inviting the community to submit
queries to the Land Transport Authority (LTA), hoping to get more information
on the results of drilling works done at Macritchie forest for the upcoming
Cross Island MRT line (CRL) (Neo, 2018).
I. First
Supporting Idea – (Level II Controlling Idea)
According
to Ms Chole Tan, project manager of Love Our Macritchie Forest, nine parties
have submitted questions about the possibility of LTA publicly releasing the
outcomes of their monitoring programmes (Neo, 2018).
II. Second
Supporting Idea – (Level II Controlling Idea)
An
assessment was done before works started determining the environmental impact
if mitigation measures were taken. But there is a lack of evidence on the
effectiveness of mitigation measures.
III. Third
Supporting Idea – (Level II Controlling Idea)
Second
phase of the assessment was done to foresee the outcome of constructing and
operating the MRT line.
+ Your Main
Idea/Thesis Statement (Level I Controlling Idea):
LTA has done the
necessary measures mitigating the impact on the environment therefore LTA
should go ahead with their construction plans.
IV. First Supporting Idea -
(Level II Controlling Idea)
LTA have
emphasized that mitigation measures will be a necessity for contractors doing site
investigations. Mitigation measures which includes having enclosures to reduce
the impact of noise.
a. Explanation of the
supporting idea
LTA has highlighted nine
mitigation measures which will be a requirement while doing on site
investigations.
b. Example or citation
which supports your assertion
According to the Straits Times, Mr Chong Kee Sen, president of The
Institution of Engineers said the measures implemented could successfully alleviate
water, noise, soil and other environmental impacts (Tan, 2019).
c. Other statements which
help support your assertion
LTA also
reported that environmental impacts will mostly be contained to the outside of
Central Catchment Nature Reserve (CCNR) and parts of the tunnel (Mahmud, 2019).
V. Second Supporting Idea -
(Level II Controlling Idea)
LTA have done their
necessary environmental impact assessment.
a. Explanation of the
supporting idea
The environmental impact
for both alignments are analysed.
b. Example or citation
which supports your assertion
Environmental Resources Management (ERM) assesses
that the environmental impact for both options can be adequately managed with
comprehensive mitigation measures and monitoring plans in place (LTA, 2019).
c. Other statements which
help support your assertion
An International Panel of Advisors (IPA), comprising industry experts in
tunnelling and underground construction have analysed that with mitigation
measures in place, both alignment options are safe (LTA, 2019).
VI. Third Supporting Idea - (Level
II Controlling Idea)
LTA have been taking all
steps in making sure to mitigate potential environmental impact.
a. Explanation of the
supporting idea
LTA are carefully
looking through all possibilities in making sure to mitigate potential environmental
impacts.
b. Example or citation
which supports your assertion
According to The Straits
Times, 3 hector of forest needs to be cleared to tunnel under the CCNR which
will cause a loss of habitat for the wildlife (Tan, 2019). LTA said that, if mitigation
measures are carried out, such as having safety barriers made wildlife-friendly
the re-planting of tress, the effect of the upcoming train line on CCNR would
be reduced (Tan, 2019).
c. Other statements which
help support your assertion
Today Online also reported that mitigation measures also includes
identifying flora species so as to be able to preserve or salvaged for
relocation and wildlife shepherding (Cheng, 2019).
VII. Conclusion –Review of Main Idea (Tying Yours
and That of the Summarized Article’)
LTA
have taken all necessary mitigation measure to reduce the impact of CRL on the
CCNR. LTA have also displayed that they will be responsible for the environmental
impact. With these, LTA should go ahead with their construction plans.
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